tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-70247285322938107422024-02-08T03:17:14.498-08:00"Me Fail English? That's Unpossible!" - R. WiggumA NYU writing instructor attempts to demystify the craft of writing well.Jeremy Karekenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15712623093595293465noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7024728532293810742.post-20750832820141750552009-05-16T13:24:00.000-07:002009-05-16T18:45:44.738-07:00Hoppy Endings - a "love" story.<meta name="ProgId" content="Word.Document"><meta name="Generator" content="Microsoft Word 11"><meta name="Originator" content="Microsoft Word 11"><link rel="File-List" href="file:///C:%5CDOCUME%7E1%5CJeremy%5CLOCALS%7E1%5CTemp%5Cmsohtml1%5C01%5Cclip_filelist.xml"><!--[if gte mso 9]><xml> <w:worddocument> <w:view>Normal</w:View> <w:zoom>0</w:Zoom> <w:punctuationkerning/> <w:validateagainstschemas/> <w:saveifxmlinvalid>false</w:SaveIfXMLInvalid> <w:ignoremixedcontent>false</w:IgnoreMixedContent> <w:alwaysshowplaceholdertext>false</w:AlwaysShowPlaceholderText> <w:compatibility> <w:breakwrappedtables/> <w:snaptogridincell/> <w:wraptextwithpunct/> <w:useasianbreakrules/> <w:dontgrowautofit/> </w:Compatibility> <w:browserlevel>MicrosoftInternetExplorer4</w:BrowserLevel> </w:WordDocument> </xml><![endif]--><!--[if gte mso 9]><xml> <w:latentstyles deflockedstate="false" latentstylecount="156"> </w:LatentStyles> </xml><![endif]--><style> <!-- /* Style Definitions */ p.MsoNormal, li.MsoNormal, div.MsoNormal {mso-style-parent:""; 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mso-para-margin-bottom:.0001pt; mso-pagination:widow-orphan; font-size:10.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language:#0400; mso-fareast-language:#0400; mso-bidi-language:#0400;} </style> <![endif]--><!--[if gte mso 9]><xml> <o:shapedefaults ext="edit" spidmax="1026"> </xml><![endif]--><!--[if gte mso 9]><xml> <o:shapelayout ext="edit"> <o:idmap ext="edit" data="1"> </o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--> <p class="act"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">hoppy endings<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="sceneheading" id="xOjPj2a0"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Jeremy Kareken<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="action"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">A large yellow ball sails by and a young woman chases after it.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">clem<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Whoa.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">grog<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">What?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Check it out?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">What?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">clem<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Her.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">What, behind the princess?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">I'm talking about the princess.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="action"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Clem watches her as she giggles and frets over her golden ball.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">She has got to be the most beautiful creature I have ever seen.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Too much trouble.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">What?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Look at her. She plays with a golden ball. You got the money for golden balls?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">No.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">You got the money for golden anything?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">No.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Then forget it. She's out of your league.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">I'm just saying. I think she's nice.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">What's with you, when did you start hopping after those things?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">She's not a thing.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Whatever. Too much trouble. Don't waste your time. Believe me.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">clem<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">I'm not going to waste my time.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Good.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="action"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">pause.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Still --<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">How you going to make her fall in love with a frog?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">clem<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">I hadn't thought that far ahead.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">You going to take her out for dragonflies?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">clem<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Well, maybe I could get some kind of sorcerer to cast a spell on me.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Oh yeah? Then what? Now you're a dude with a taste for arthropods. You going to get a job?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">clem<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">I guess.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Too late. She'd never have you. Jobs are very middle class. You think she's ever worked a day in her life?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">clem<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Well, maybe the sorcerer--<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Or sorceress--<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">or sorceress-- could make me rich too?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">That's a terrible idea.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">What, why?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Think of what you'll do to the money supply.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">clem<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">What?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">If sorceresses went around making all this money then every other bit of money's worth less. It's very inflationary monetary policy.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">clem<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">I'm not interested in economics.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">No, you just want to hook up with a princess. My advice, stick with amphibians. Maybe hang out with a turtle. At least you'll have something to talk about. <o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Jeez, there she goes again. I think she likes us. She's losing that ball on purpose.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Dry up. You don't have a snowball's chance.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">What do you know about it, anyways?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">You wouldn't understand.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">clem<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">No, enlighten me, mister super frog. You who are so wise in the ways of the human female.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">All right, all right. Don't get jumpy.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">clem<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">No, seriously, all of a sudden you're this expert frog. I say I think she's cute and you're all over me. Let me have my fun and keep out of it.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Fine fine.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">I wasn't saying I was going to marry her. I was just saying I thought she was cute.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Hey, frog, fine. Live and let live. Go find a sorceress.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">And another thing-- what's all this about sorceress. Are you one of these feminist--<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">grog<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">I used to be a Prince, okay?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">clem<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Oh, shut. Up. A prince?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Forget it.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">I had no idea I was in the presence of royalty. Prince! Are the flies to his majesty's liking?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Knock it off. This is why I can't share anything with you.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">No, go on, Emperor--<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Prince!<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">clem<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">See that pond over there? I was grand Sultan of--<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">You don't know! So just shut your fly-hole and die, okay?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">clem<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">All right, all right. I didn't mean to offend you.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">I know those people is all I'm saying.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">So what happened that you're down here with us?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Oh, forget it. You're not interested.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">clem<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Yes I am.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">You're just going to laugh at me.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">clem<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">No. I'm not.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">It sucks up there, believe me. You're worried about the aristocracy all day, because they never think they have enough land, other members of the royal family are trying to stab you in the head because they think they'd make a better king than you. And then there's the peasants. Don't get me started on the peasants. You try to help them out, and then these illiterate slobs get shirty with you, like who else is going to till the fields, smart guy? Then because you give a little extra money to them, every peasant wants some, so you start printing some. And then the economy's collapsing around your ears and the next thing I know this old crone starts screaming at me.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Oh no.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Yeah. You see this coming. I say get your stupid fat hairy warts out of my face you old creep!<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Never piss off a sorceress.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">You're telling me. So she lifts her magic staff and screams "warts I have but warty shall you be. Back to the pond, return to the scum when I count one, two, three."<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">clem<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Wow.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Yeah, wow.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">You'd think she would have turned you into a toad.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">What?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">clem<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">I mean, we don't have warts.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Neither do toads.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Yeah, but you look more warty if you're a toad. Just seems more poetic justice to me.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Well clearly she wasn't a biologist.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">clem<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">I'm just saying that in witching school, you'd think--<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Can we get back to me?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Sure.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Sure it sucked for a while, but then you start to realize - hey, I'm out in the sun all day, when I'm not in the pool. Plenty of food, once you get used to it, and let's face it, this is prime waterfront property. The real estate is nice. All this "soon, son you will become a king." Feh, who needs it.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">I could have used a little of it.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Forget it. You have any idea how hard it is to find a princess you're not related to? You don't want your kids getting all web-footed, right? Well, I mean, when you look like that you don't want the web-feet. Trust me. It's easier and better to just stay like we are.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Okay. I think I get it.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Good. So don't go getting her kiss you.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">What? Why not?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">It's a well-known fact that a kiss from a princess turns any frog into a handsome prince.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">I thought you had to be cursed first.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">No. That's a myth. There are quite a few princes out there who came from frogs, believe me.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">You'd think we'd hear of it more.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Well, it's uncommon. Good luck trying to kiss a frog. But no. I'm happy the way I am.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">clem<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">So I just get her to kiss me and I'm-- prince?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Have you listened to a word I said?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Yeah, sure, I'm just saying--<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">You don't need it. Trust me.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">clem<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">I could try it.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Go ahead.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">What, really?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Go get her to kiss you. But you're in for a world of misery.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">clem<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">I might.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Don't say I didn't warn you.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">I hearby absolve you of all responsibility.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">You're digging your own grave, I'm telling you.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="action"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Clem hops off. Offstage we hear:<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">clem (o.s.)<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Hey, lady! Come here--<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">princess (o.s.)<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">EEK! Get away from me--<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM (O.S.)<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Wait, just let me--<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">PRINCESS (o.s)<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Daaad!<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">king (o.s.)<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Come here you--<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM (O.S.)<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Now hold on, I mean you no harm--<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="action"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">off stage, we hear sounds of pounding. Grog watches as Clem gets pummeled. Clem drags himself on stage.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">How'd it go?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Not too good.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="action"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Grog tries to stifle a laugh.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">clem<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">What?<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">I'm sorry-- I --<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="action"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Grog starts laughing hysterically.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">WHAT?!<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">I can't believe you believed me! I really thought you had me with the toad wart thing. But you totally bought it!<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">clem<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Dickweed.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">Interspecies transmutation! Sorceress! You are such a sucker.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">I'm bleeding over here.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">GROG<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">I know. I'm sorry. Excuse me. Bwaaah! Hah! Hah!<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">CLEM<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">all right, all right-- it's not that--<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="action"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">They look at each other, quietly, Grog trying not to laugh. Until neither can hold it in any longer.<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="character"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">clem and grog<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="dialog"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">BWAAAAAAAHHHHH HAHAH!-<o:p></o:p></span></p> <p class="sceneheading" id="sntlkaa0"><span style="font-family: "Courier New";">The End.<o:p></o:p></span></p> Jeremy Karekenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15712623093595293465noreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7024728532293810742.post-9208591632512525692009-03-09T08:50:00.000-07:002009-03-09T08:59:10.743-07:00Hurry: The beginning of the recallment procedure to your vehicle control mechanism must be done with haste or else vehicle crash can occur.<a onblur="try {parent.deselectBloggerImageGracefully();} catch(e) {}" href="http://freeskies.files.wordpress.com/2008/12/car_crash_1.jpg"><img style="float:left; margin:0 10px 10px 0;cursor:pointer; cursor:hand;width: 510px; height: 306px;" src="http://freeskies.files.wordpress.com/2008/12/car_crash_1.jpg" border="0" alt="" /></a><br />The following is an actual car recall letter from the 80s. The late, great Professors Frank Kinahan and Michael Williams gave it to me during their amazing class "The Little Red Schoolhouse," their method of improving style and clarity. Obviously this letter's the Goofus version. The Gallant goes something like this: "You need to get to a car mechanic to fix two problems. If you don't, you could crash and die."<br /><br /><blockquote>A defect which involves the possible failure of a frame support plate may exist on your vehicle. This plate (front suspension pivot bar support plate) connects a portion of the front suspension to the vehicle frame, and its failure could affect vehicle directional control, particularly during heavy brake application. In addition, your vehicle may require adjustment service to the hood secondary catch system. The secondary catch may be misaligned, so that the hood may not be adequately restrained to prevent hood fly-up in the event the primary catch is inadvertently left unengaged. Sudden hood fly-up beyond the secondary catch while driving could impair driver visibility. In certain circumstances, occurrence of either of the above conditions could result in vehicle crash without prior warning.<br /></blockquote><br /><br />And we wonder why General Motors is going out of business...Jeremy Karekenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15712623093595293465noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7024728532293810742.post-68578865732015022182009-03-07T15:33:00.000-08:002009-03-09T09:05:14.368-07:00The *new, improved* parts of a sentence.Back in your younger years, someone undoubtedly misled you by telling you that a sentence had to have a subject and a verb. Well, that person is right, but the term "subject" is confusing - the other definitions of the word are very passive: people are subject to violence, and people take a course in a particular subject. In this last example, the word subject isn't a subject, it's an object. Confusing, huh?<br /><br />Instead of thinking about a sentence having a subject and a verb, try to think of it having a "character" and an "action." The star of the sentence, the character, is the thing that's DOING the action. <br /><br />Consider this sentence:<br /><br /><blockquote>The problem with that line of thinking, and in most philosophies involving laissez-faire economics, is that it is neglectful of human dignity.<br /><br /></blockquote><br /><br />What is the subject of the sentence? And what's that subject doing? The answer is that there are a couple subjects, woven within each other - it's a needlessly complex sentence. Is the "problem" the subject? Is the "line of thinking" the subject? How about laissez-faire economics, is that the subject? And each of these subjects are *abstract concepts,* not a simple person, place or thing. Some of the nouns are actually verbs turned into nouns (called a nominalization, if you want to get technical). "Thinking" is normally a verb, but in this case it's turned into a noun. <br /><br />And that line of thinking is just sitting there - it's ISing. Who's neglecting human dignity? You see, the reader is forced to do some very hard work with this sentence. First, they'll have to imagine an abstract concept (a line of thinking) and then generalize that abstraction, and then it just sits there. It doesn't neglect, it IS neglectful. Of course it's neglectful, lines of thinking haven't helped anyone since the beginning of time.<br /><br />And look at the distance between the subject and verb. From the problem to the "is" is quite a distance. What are the odds the reader will have to double back and make sure he or she has understood? Quite high.<br /><br />Let's revise that sentence: <br /><br /><blockquote>"In using laissez faire economics, the government has neglected basic human dignity."<br /></blockquote><br />Now, the truth of this sentence may not be proven, but it makes its point much better and faster, and has more information in fewer words. Did the writer mean the government? We don't know - it was ambiguous. He could have meant academia: "by perpetuating laissez-faire economics, Universities fail to teach their students basic human dignity."<br /><br />You see, when we revised the sentence, both times, we included a character and an action. Yes, sometimes the character must be an inanimate object or some institutional body, but the AGENT OF CHANGE is the star of the sentence.<br /><br />When writing a sentence, strive to make agent of change the main character of the sentence.Jeremy Karekenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15712623093595293465noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7024728532293810742.post-12403705363424765652009-03-07T14:51:00.000-08:002009-03-07T15:02:05.823-08:00On Jargon<object width="425" height="344"><param name="movie" value="http://www.youtube.com/v/2yW6vObBOVE&hl=en&fs=1"></param><param name="allowFullScreen" value="true"></param><param name="allowscriptaccess" value="always"></param><embed src="http://www.youtube.com/v/2yW6vObBOVE&hl=en&fs=1" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" allowscriptaccess="always" allowfullscreen="true" width="425" height="344"></embed></object><br /><br />Suppose you're a healer or wizard in feudal times. You've discovered this magical potion called “aspirin,” made from the bark of the white willow tree. People flock to you, paying you thousands of gold ducats to use your miracle cure. Then like a moron, you decide to make your recipe for “aspirin” public. You have no secret anymore. Poof. The market disappears in puff of dragon smoke – everyone's out grabbing their own white willow trees. Everyone suddenly has the ability to stop fever and pain and you, my dear wizard, are out of a job. While everyone is healthy and headache free, you have paid for your candor with your livelihood. <br /><br />Witness this hard water softener named Calgon. For those without Flash, the commercial went like this: When asked how he got his shirts so clean and white, this hoary Chinese launderer replied “Ancient Chinese Secret.” His assimilated wife, after calling her husband “some hotshot,” spills the beans. Loudly and within earshot of western roundeye customer, she tasks her husband with buying more Calgon. The justifiably angry colonialist whitebread occidental customer growls at the wizard of white: “Ancient Chinese Secret, huh?” The launderer goes out of business and has to run back to running opium dens, but that's a chapter for another commercial. You see, rather than communicate the recipe for white shirt, this caricature preferred to use jargon. <br /><br />Jargon is the equivalent of misdirection or legerdemain - language used to confuse by dazzling. By confusing your clients, competitors and employers with magic and hoodoo and voodoo, you think you're making yourself indispensible, but instead you're breaching trust. The IT department tells you: "Oh, your hard drive needs to be defragmented because it's got bad sectors and trouble in the partitioning with--” Oh, just shut up and take my money, techie - until you discover he's full of crap and you get rid of the swindler. Jargon is only a temporary solution, at best.<br /><br />Writing teachers use jargon too. But it's as flimsy and needless as magic. “Don't split an infinitive!” they'll tell you, lest your mother break her back or something. “For GOD's sake, stay away from that superlative before you modify it!” as if you remember what an infinitive or superlative is. As if you care. By confusing you with rules of grammar, by making you diagram and partition and conjugate and decline, they have dazzled you with a kind of illusion – that writing is hard, and that you should leave it to the professionals. <br /><br />But writing isn't that hard. Don't let the practitioners of writing-jargon scare you away from writing.Jeremy Karekenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15712623093595293465noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7024728532293810742.post-35618713361699764972009-03-05T06:23:00.001-08:002009-03-05T06:50:11.707-08:00The Dow of Pooh<p style="margin-top: 0.08in; margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: 150%; page-break-before: always;" align="center"> <b>The Dow of Pooh</b></p> <p style="text-indent: 0.5in; margin-top: 0.08in; margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: 150%;" align="center"> <b>Chapter 2: A picture is worth a thousand words, but a story is worth a thousand pictures -<br />in which you learn to captivate with the art of a good sentence.</b></p><span class="fullpost"> <p style="text-indent: 0.5in; margin-top: 0.08in; margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: 150%;" align="left"> Many of my business clients are worried about their grammar, and they hand me emails marked redder than blood as their managers marked their prose to hell. The last angry red mark is usually something like “I don't understand this,” and sometimes in some rather strong language So my clients ask me, “grammatically, what's wrong with this?” Often, the answer is “nothing.” Technically, the sentences are often fine but completely incomprehensible. My clients get caught up in the details of how to write. “I'm worried about the subjunctive.” Or “should I have split the infinitive? I don't remember.” The grammar isn't the problem. I want you to let go of the technical exigencies of the English language – we're not linguists, we're trying to get things done. Stop thinking of grammar as a subject, a predicate, a direct object, a subjunctive whosimiwhatsis followed by an infinitive that you don't split. Think of your writing as a story, a story consisting of a setting, a character and an action.</p> <p style="text-indent: 0.5in; margin-top: 0.08in; margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: 150%;" align="left"> I'm a playwright, a screenwriter and a business writing coach and a business writing instructor at NYU. You may not see the overlap, because writing drama or comedy and writing business are two very different activities. One requires that you say what you mean, and one requires that you say precisely what you don't. However, I'm not going to talk about the difference between the disciplines, rather the thing they have in common: story. All writing needs a story. I'll say it again: all writing needs a story. I don't care if you're writing a three panel comic strip about a beagle and a bald kid or you're writing about the necessity mark-to-market valuation of assets; good writing always has a story. </p> <p style="text-indent: 0.5in; margin-top: 0.08in; margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: 150%;" align="left"> But when you look for “storytelling” in your job description, it seems to be missing. You say “I'm not here to tell stories, I'm here to state the facts, justify my actions and not get fired.” However, from instructions on how to hunt for wooly mammoth to the Bible to the best Annual Reports, information is best communicated through story. I'm not asking you to turn your 10-Ks into a fable about a moose, I'm asking that you consider every sentence of what you write as a story in itself, and every sentence part of a larger story. Every sentence needs a story. I'll say it again: actually, no I won't. But I will ask you consider how a sentence can be a story.</p> <p style="text-indent: 0.5in; margin-top: 0.08in; margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: 150%;"> What is a story? A story is a process of thought that leads one person to imagine what another person is thinking. So what does a story do? It focuses one person into thinking like the other person by engaging the imagination. And how does a story work? We already know – stories are in our bones, our DNA, our blood. Pick a story you love. Think about it. What's the first thing you think of?</p> <p style="text-indent: 0.5in; margin-top: 0.08in; margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: 150%;"> “<span style="color:#880000;"><span style="font-family:comic;"><span style="font-size:130%;"><b>Here he is Edward Bear, coming downstairs now, bump, bump, bump, on the back of his head, behind Christopher Robin.” - Winnie the Pooh, A.A. Milne</b></span></span></span></p> <p style="text-indent: 0.5in; margin-top: 0.08in; margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: 150%;"> <span style="color:#880000;">“<span style="font-family:comic;"><span style="font-size:130%;"><b>The sacred soil of Ilios is rent with shaft and pit...” The Iliad, Homer</b></span></span></span></p> <p style="text-indent: 0.5in; margin-top: 0.08in; margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: 150%;"> <span style="color:#880000;">“<span style="font-family:comic;"><span style="font-size:130%;"><b>A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away.” Star Wars, George Lucas.</b></span></span></span></p> <p style="text-indent: 0.5in; margin-top: 0.08in; margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: 150%;"> What is the first thing you think of when you think of a story? The first thing is where and when. Where are we starting? For Winnie the Pooh, we're starting “here.” For the Iliad, “the soil of Ilios” and of course we know where Star Wars starts. Stories need context, and the context that most grabs the imagination is the setting: the time and place. Every time you indulge in a memory of your childhood, what gets you started? Place and time. Every sentence should start with context, a way for people to place the story. And there's no better context than place. Orient your reader first. The setting might be the discussion of earnings, or it may be a galaxy far, far away, but align your readers to the where before moving on to the next part of the story.</p> <p style="text-indent: 0.5in; margin-top: 0.08in; margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: 150%;"> What is the next part of the story? Every story has two things in common: people and action. People doing. It's that simple. In a sentence, people act. Remember that sentence: “in a sentence, people act.” Consider that sentence. The context, the where is “in a sentence.” The next step in any story is the who: “people.” </p> <p style="text-indent: 0.5in; margin-top: 0.08in; margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: 150%;"> Human beings are social animals; we couldn't survive without other people. To us, people are the most important things on the planet. And yet we constantly forget to include them in our sentences. Too frequently we'll start with an abstract concept that seems to rise ex-nihlo, or out of nothing. “Customer service is a top priority at CompanyCo,” is not a powerful story. The star of that sentence, the one who's out there doing stuff (in this case, not much - 'is') is customer service. In the movies, I've never seen Customer Service is never played by Harrison Ford. In your childhood, do you remember customer service ever coming to your rescue? Did customer service ever buy you ice cream? “At CompanyCo, we value our customers,” is a much better story.. We start with a setting and then comes the who. And next, we come to the meat of the sentence – the action.</p> <p style="text-indent: 0.5in; margin-top: 0.08in; margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: 150%;"> The point of every story is the action. And it's the last thing people remember. In a PowerPoint presentation, the last slide is generally “Next Steps,” or the action you want the group to take. When you read correspondence from a colleague the one thing you want to understand is “what do you want me to do about it?” And that's what you remember, the action, the last portion of the email. When your colleague closes the email, the last thing you want him or her to read is what they're supposed to do. And so it is with every sentence, the meat comes after the salad. Where, who and action.</p> <p style="text-indent: 0.5in; margin-top: 0.08in; margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: 150%;"> So a sentence is a story, and each story consists of “where,” “who” and “do.” It's that simple. Setting, character, action. See? When you cast your stories with humans they're more interesting. When they do stuff, we follow them. Try to give every sentence some human interest. Or at least give every sentence a more interesting subject than “Customer Service.”</p> <p style="text-indent: 0.5in; margin-top: 0.08in; margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: 150%;"> The Stakes</p> <p style="text-indent: 0.5in; margin-top: 0.08in; margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: 150%;"> In screenwriting, when we submit a script that people won't read, it's accompanied by something called a “logline,” or a one-to-two sentence summary of the entire two-hour picture. You have to distill every action, motion and character into two (preferably one) sentences. And every screenwriting textbook will tell you to give the buyer a setting, a character, an action... and then something very important – the stakes. Stakes are a reason to care – in screenwriting stakes are life and death. In business, stakes are time and money. When you write to a customer, a colleague or manager always keep in mind “so what? What if I don't listen to you?” We'll talk about the So What in the next chapter and how to get people to listen and hang on your every word.</p> </span>Jeremy Karekenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15712623093595293465noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7024728532293810742.post-79704948120712506352009-03-04T13:06:00.000-08:002009-03-04T16:29:54.368-08:00Punch Your High School English Teachers in the Face -or- BAD RULESThree rules you can throw out the window:<br /><br />1) A preposition is a terrible word to end a sentence with. Says who? Excuse me, “says whom?” Winston Churchill used to make fun of this rule when he said “this is the sort of trouble up with which I will not put.” If you need to dangle a preposition to make your sentence more comprehensible, so be it.<br /><br />2) You're not allowed to ever split an infinitive. For some reason, you can't put words between to and the verb when using the infinitive form. Why? I have no clue. Some of my favorite phrases are rife with split infinitives. Any Star Trek fans out there? “To boldly go where no man has gone before” sounds better than “To go boldly where no man has gone before.” It's not so bold after the infinitive.<br /><br />3) Never, ever modify a superlative. This rule certainly doesn't apply in the US, where the people elected to form a more perfect union. I do wish people would follow one element of this rule, though. Whenever I hear someone say “somewhat” or “very” unique, I break out in spots. Unique means “one.” You can't be somewhat singular or very singular any more than you can be a little pregnant or slightly dead.Jeremy Karekenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15712623093595293465noreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7024728532293810742.post-75825900155863750052009-03-04T12:58:00.000-08:002009-03-04T13:04:43.573-08:00Welcomez to Write Goodly My business clients ask me to do one thing “make me write good.”
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<br /> “Well,” I say. And I pause and wait for them to ask the inevitable “well, what?” I say “make me write well.”
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<br /> And then the client says “but I asked you first. What am I paying you for?” And I say “for what are you paying?”
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<br /> And the client says “don't you know?” And we go along like that until I either get punched in the face, or they write me a check. To me, there's no more beautiful piece of writing than a check. There should be a poem written about it, but that poem will never be as beautiful as that check. Unfortunately, after they write me the check, I'll look at them straight in the eye and tell them “you can already write well.”
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<br /> I know, I should have waited to cash the check, but I have to sound all mystical and sensei-like, that way they get the full Mr. Myagi wax-on-wax-off spirit of Zen writing. I'm a sage, a mystic. I am the master. But I'm also right – they do know how to write, because they know how to read.
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<br /> Welcome to WriteGoodly - an unorthodox guide to writing without fear.
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